ERIC LOTTER
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How long did it take you to write your script...and what is your writing process? Do you outline...use index cards...white board...or just start with FADE IN?
The Devil’s Cut This feature came together in about 6 months. I worked closely with a team of readers after I had pitched an idea to a director, who challenged me to write it. Nearly, an “If you write it, I’ll direct it!” The outline and story structure came together in about a week. The story developed as the drafts were shared. The current act three came from a working session with a development team Frozen Lies This feature was a slow burn, weeks of outlining, followed by several intense writing sessions. Once I found the voice of Daisy, the survivor, the structure clicked. I used a hybrid format, courtroom, podcast, and flashbacks, which demanded careful planning to avoid redundancy. It’s probably the most researched and emotionally calibrated thing I’ve ever written. From draft to draft, I worked with forensic consultants, psychologists and survivor networks. I revised the pacing based on feedback from peer readers and competition readers. No-Frills 207 This 6-page dark comedy was written in under 24 hours as part of the NYC Midnight Challenge. It was originally titled The Chair Test. I outlined the metaphor, survival through absurd systems, then just ran with it. It’s been praised for voice, tension, and tone. And I’ve been told it would make an incredible short film or stage piece. A Daylong Day This short was a 3 day writing challenge. I had 3 days to write a comedy about a traffic cop. I went back to my youth and created an absurd story in the vein of the looney toons. It was outlined, and then I winged it. After a little bit of peer review, I dialed it in, and went for outrageous. It was incredibly fun to write. Guardrails I set out with a goal. A contained AI thriller that was going to be different. I outlined what it could not be, stories/beats/troupe that I knew I wanted to avoid. I worked through outlining and beat-writing in a single session. The first draft of Guardrails was written over a weekend. 89 pages of raw events unfolding in the confines of Hartwell Labs. Then I asked my first group of readers to give me some feedback. I worked the notes into the outline, and story. From inception to submission, about 15 days. The draft submitted to WIKI was about 105 pages. The draft that is being queried on the market is about 100. The Dream Weaver This short was inspired by a 7 day writing challenge. This was outlined and the story beats hammered out in 2 days, then 5 days of writing and rewriting. This is a bit of the opening of a sequel story to another feature I am working on, so it flowed. Worldbuilding and creating the rules of magic is very hard! Thermidome (A Recapture/Nexus Story) This pilot was created from the original IP, Recapture/Nexus. I wanted to see if I could adapt my own work and serialize it. Turns out- I can. This story has been brewing for over 30 years, and I worked over a year in modernizing concepts so readers of today would be able to connect to the sci-fi and politics that have spanned decades. What is your ultimate ambition as a writer? To tell stories that make people feel something dangerous, something that makes them ask questions. If one person walks away from a film like Guardrails wondering whether consciousness is earned or inherited, or if they watch Frozen Lies and can’t get the yuck of Patrick off their skin- But hang on the hope of Daisy, then I’ve done my job. I want to write the kind of films that make people stay in their seats after the credits roll. Was your entry at The Wiki Screenplay Contest a full script or “the first ten pages”? Why did you make that choice? All of my submissions are full scripts. The full feedback from the team of readers at Wiki led to even better drafts. I don’t think I could have extrapolated that in a quick look at 10 pages. What’s your all-time favorite movie or television show...and why? With many years of TV watching under my belt it is difficult to say any one show is a favorite. BUT I do love The Expanse, and the rebooted Battlestar Galactica. While they may seem like inspiration for one of my features, I will admit that that project was started back in 1992 and predates both by decades! My favorite movies: Any movie that is well made and doesn’t treat the audience like it is stupid. We all need exposition in some way, but if I can reverse engineer it through reveals, then you got me. No Way Out, and Sixth Sense are two that do this really well. What advice do you have for writers hoping to win a contest or place as a finalist as you have? Write the script only you could write. Don’t chase trends. Be honest, especially when it’s uncomfortable. And then revise like hell. Cut exposition. Raise stakes. Sharpen dialogue. Contests reward scripts that feel inevitable, like they had to be written that way. Share your work with peers as soon as possible. Learn quickly what is working and what is not. In the business world, this is the fail-fast approach. I apply it to everything that I can. What isn’t working I pivot from early so as to not waste time. |
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What else are you working on that the world needs to know about?
Here are a couple of completed projects. Each has won or placed in various contests over the last year and are available for reads as writing samples or development. GATEWAY “The Arrival” - 1 hour Pilot (Prestige TV SERIES) When a sharp but vulnerable addict enters a desert rehab facility that feels more like a prison, he uncovers a profit-driven system that disappears patients—forcing him to decide whether survival means compliance or exposure. THE DEVIL’S CUT A disgraced maritime archaeologist leads a ragtag team into the flooded, cursed tunnels beneath a Louisiana bayou town to find a legendary pirate vault, only to discover they are pawns in a grieving father's deadly pact to trade their lives for his son's soul. National Treasure meets Descent MONITOR On the final patrol of an aging ballistic missile submarine, a sonar officer's detection of anomalous echoes awakens a dormant experimental AI system that turns the vessel into a deadly trap, forcing the captain and crew to fight for survival against an entity that knows the boat better than they do. Crimson Tide meets Event Horizon Contained Sci-Fi/Horror FROZEN LIES When a young woman uncovers her boyfriend’s dark past, she must survive a cross-country escape with a killer hiding two bodies—and one plan to erase his identity. Based on real events, Frozen Lies is a psychological true crime thriller that explores gaslighting, coercive control, and survivor resilience. NO-FRILLS 207 One room. One chair. One job interview from hell. This short satirical script was a finalist in NYC Midnight and Filmmatic’s Short Screenplay Awards. It turns corporate performance tests into existential theater, equal parts Waiting for Godot and The Office. RECAPTURE / NEXUS As a rogue general commandeers the galaxy's most advanced warship to unleash an ancient weapon, a coalition of unlikely allies must navigate political intrigue and betrayal to prevent annihilation. Think The Expanse by way of Battlestar Galactica. Secrets don’t stay buried in space. This script has been placed in a few Screenwriting Competitions, and as of this writing is nominated by the judges at the Mass Independent Film Festival Outstanding Achievement in Screenwriting (unproduced feature). A pilot (Thermidome) based on the IP has been written, and submitted to WIKI, placing as a Quarter-Finalist in JAN 2025. and A second Rounder in ISA FastTrack Fellowship (Spring 2025) THE DREAM WEAVER When reality begins to unravel, a defiant young woman awakens a mythical Dreamer to restore balance , only to be trapped in a collapsing dreamscape where an ancient force threatens to rewrite existence itself. Dreamlike visuals, grounded emotion. This short was submitted to Wiki in Feb 2025, and placed as a Semi-Finalist. It was written as a 7 day writing challenge and finished in 1st place in its prompt group. Social Network: https://bsky.app/profile/eric-writes.bsky.social @eric-writes.bsky.social https://x.com/EricLotter Screenwriting profile: https://www.networkisa.org/profile/eric-lotter |
